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[personal profile] queenlua
I can't really write a pithy, satisfying teaser for what happens in these chapters without major spoilers for what happened in the previous chapters, so... suffice to say, this fic continues to have (1) Reyson leaning hard into being the Most Insane Man Alive, (2) Naesala having a bad time, and (3) (new with this update!!!) a pretty big Leanne arc. If any of that sounds like your bag, oh boy have I got an additional 53k words for you...!

Start with the new chapters.

Or: read from the beginning.

also there's NEW ART in chapters 15 and 16, my big bang artist is the greatest

The next update will also be the last (it's fully written, just needs editing), so now's a great time to join the ride :D

Date: 2024-10-23 08:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kradeelav
(spoilers for the fic if anyone else is reading these commments)

god that was such a HEARTWRENCHING delight to read, as you know....

something else i totally forgor to mention in my comments is it was honestly really cool reading sanaki's little flirtation with authoritarianisim arc. like it feels a little hokey to call it that, but you took something that *could* have been moralizing, and naturally wove it in as a corruption of that mind reading ability especially with how reyson goes mad with it in more than a few ways. i think it clicked when she started really going hard against the corruption and i've always heard that one of a tell-tale signs of a dictator is a disproportionate focus on rooting out corruption (since it's easy for the populus to get behind but can focus power a little too narrowly for select people without the checks and balances.)

THAT comment was kinda policy heavy for a fanfic lmao but i found it neat!! :D

Date: 2024-10-24 12:01 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lassarina
Congrats on finishing!

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