Notebook Scans: Wings Dancing in the Darkness

[queenlua]

Hey my exchange fic got done; let's see if I'll hate myself for it in the morning.

But before that time comes, here, have some random notebook scans from when I was writing the fic.

These notes are from pretty early on, when I knew I wanted to write Rafiel and Naesala and a swamp but I didn't know much else. I was just kicking around ideas, but I was surprised how many of these made it into the fic after I'd finished going down some dead ends first.





It should probably bother me that I end up drawing Lost comparisons as often as I do when I'm outlining fic, both of the fan and original varieties. That show was excellent excellent at characterization and god-awful at plot. Whups.

Also I'm almost at the end of this notebook and I don't know of a Japanese bookstore near me that sells more these particular notebooks D: I tried ordering some online at the beginning of last semester, but turns out navigating Japanese retail websites is pretty damn complicated even if you do have a semi-fluent Japanese speaker sitting beside you while you do it. I should've bought more of them while I was in Seattle ugh.

Comments

[amielleon]

Oh yeah, I forgot to say this in the review but the induced madness via staying transformed too long is very cute and makes a lot of sense given NoJ's ki explanation.

[queenlua]

I have totally been sitting on that headcanon for like, years now. The fact that I got an excuse to use it in this story made me pretty damn giddy, not gonna lie :P

[mark_asphodel]

Oh, wow. I thought that part was canon.

I mean, it's canon for FE3 dragons so when I saw it in the 'fic I just nodded and went "yep" and didn't think twice.