Scraps from the Notebook: "Dog in the Vineyard"

I love looking at artists' sketchbooks and works-in-progress — there's just something so fun about seeing the lines and shapes in a rough sketch, or watching how a project progresses and changes as it gets closer to completion.

I really love looking at the writers' equivalent, too — drafts, outlines, notes, and so on — but for whatever reason, writers don't really share such things nearly as readily as artists do.

Anyway, I thought I'd share some bits from my notebook, written while I was planning "Dog in the Vineyard," for anyone who's similarly interested in such things.

( Spoilers for aforementioned fic, obviously. Also, images ahoy! )